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Comments of chapter undefined of Victorious Fighter!

AdamAnarchy
AdamAnarchyLv4AdamAnarchy

I'm going to give you my honest opinion, I recommend that you get rid of this forced mission thing, the system allows him to create the mission he wants, so these forced missions are meaningless and unnecessary. Secondly, I recommend that you leave the pregnancy until the final arc and don't have children until at least the penultimate arc of your story

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Conor_Webster
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Thanks for the update can’t wait for the next one I think it’s to soon for haruto to have a child maybe later down the line I mean he what 16 now way to early for the responsibility of raising a kid it will also clash with his goals getting stronger

cyberlector_321
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gracias por el capitulo

DaoistF0koDD
DaoistF0koDDLv2DaoistF0koDD

¡Gracias por el capítulo! 😁 👍

Okhwang725
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AdamAnarchy
AdamAnarchyLv4AdamAnarchy

I'm going to give you my honest opinion, I recommend that you get rid of this forced mission thing, the system allows him to create the mission he wants, so these forced missions are meaningless and unnecessary. Secondly, I recommend that you leave the pregnancy until the final arc and don't have children until at least the penultimate arc of your story

D_R_5303
D_R_5303Lv3D_R_5303

... Sabes creo que no es bueno que el prota tenga hijos tan pronto....

jcp1207
jcp1207Lv3jcp1207

Gracias por el capítulo

AlexPendragon
AlexPendragonLv1AlexPendragon

author could you tell me who Ryouko is that I'm not remembering?

AlexPendragon
AlexPendragonLv1AlexPendragon

thanks for the chapter... good day to all who read