Killix_Kreed
if a talking system ain't already an annoyance the mc wants to look like a twig this is disappointing can't say I'm impressed or excited about that outcome no matter how desperate I may be to find something good to read
If author is going to retcon the systems sentience that breaks the entire flow of the novel to this point. I’d either stick with it being intelligent or go back and edit the previous chapters to maintain consistency… Also not a huge fan of MC choosing to be a twig. I’d of just gone with a typical healthy young adult physique. Oh well.