Comments of chapter undefined of King of succubus

He have a succubus wife? Mc please take care of her hehe

Just some advice I assume your first language isn't English because you mix up the male and female words like for male it would be Him/He |||Female would be Her/She. Other then you mixing up the gender pronouns your English is good I just get confused quite a bit reading actions between the characters. This comment isn't meant to complain just giving advice

I like this story so far but the writer needs an American English editor. there are a lit of parts that are very hard to read.