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Comments of chapter undefined of FINAL LEGACY : MULTI-GOD SYSTEM

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Sevnir
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Where is this going? You are writing a "system" novel, yet the system seems to be a last-minute addition. Where does the system come in to play? Systems are supposed to gradually make the person stronger. However: 1. He levels up, but gets NOTHING for it...no stat increases, no bonus points, no unlocks, no skills, nothing. 2. He needs exp to level up, but only gets exp from quests (obviously because he got no exp from beating the demons) 3. In 35 chapters, he's had 3 quests, still hasn't finished the first quest, and chose to fail the third. Where were the quests for the other martial arts exams? 4. He trains like crazy for 2 weeks, but doesn't gain even one point in strength, stamina, agility, or durability?? 5. The stat screen is barely mentioned, and not even used (see above) 6. He gets a very useful skill from the system (inspect), but has used it only twice in 30+ chapters Why even have the system? Why have the inspect skill? Why level up? They are all useless so far. You could have just made him gradually unlock the necklace, and saved your readers from lack-of-system usage that most readers label as a stupid MC. I'll keep reading a bit more, but I'm regretting giving gold tickets and unlocking chapters.

Fortune_daine
Fortune_daineAuthorFortune_daine

Thanks. I'll work on the system to the best of my abilities. you can believe that.🤞

Sevnir:Fair enough. I am enjoying the story, but the system genre and title were starting to clash with the content. I appreciate your response. I look forward to your plans for Ethan.
DaoistjgSy04
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Sevnir well said