Comments of chapter undefined of I became a legion lich

I became a legion lich

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PragmaticoLv15Pragmatico

Since this story is over a year old and the grammar is still not fixed I will pass on reading this one. If you care about your story edit your work and make it best you can. Almost every sentence is messed up. Going from his/him to her or their. Changing perspectives mid paragraph. Random grammatical errors everywhere

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LordofRavensLv4LordofRavens

The grammar is odd but compared with a lot of other stories on webnovel it's a B- rating.

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HelroneconLv13Helronecon

Is this author stupid or something? Did he use translate machines to write this novel? Errors can be found in every sentences I feel like my eye get burnt just after reading this chapter

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DarksiiddeLv11Darksiidde

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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DarksiiddeLv11Darksiidde

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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DarksiiddeLv11Darksiidde

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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DarksiiddeLv11Darksiidde

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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DarksiiddeLv11Darksiidde

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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DaoistBsBz8QLv15DaoistBsBz8Q

The grammar needs work Thanks for the chapter

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ZerusLv15Zerus

I despise parents who hit their children. i think it shows how incapable they are as a parent and as a person if they are unable to raise your child without violence. just disgusting

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CorbopLv1Corbop

Use grammarly

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William_AlanLv14William_Alan

Ok, your Grammer and phonetics are atrocious. Beyond that it is a good story. The first chapter is very relatable. Most children have tried to do something to impress their parents, only to get punished for it. Keep going and for the love of webnovel get an editor.

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Devon_NalewakLv4Devon_Nalewak

Use Grammarly the app it will help

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coco31324Lv13coco31324

you keep mixing 2 person and 3rd person POV so keep that in mind on future chapters

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leo_woodLv1leo_wood

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