Comments of chapter undefined of Sword God in a World of Magic

Good chapter, but... "But since Alex's mind could... the mana flowed into Alex's body." "As soon as the force entered Alex's Body..." "It was like Alex was taking a bath.." "Alex opened his eyes." Man, I don't know how you do it, but It's pretty tiring to read your story. When you read it once again before posting, don't you find it strange? There is no need to repeat his name in each sentence because nobody has been introduced between them. If you want to improve your text, just do it, and you'll discover a new world in your novel! The writing is concise and not too complex to read (sometimes, it's good though, having some literary words).