Comments of chapter undefined of The Herb King

I don't remember much about the writing quality of the previous version, but I can say now that everything is quite smooth, I like how the sentences are structured as it is easy to understand, and ultimately imagine the characters and settings. Although sometimes more details would be appreciated in descriptive moments, otherwise I hope that this version is much better executed, because there is great potential here!

Although you say your English isn’t the best, it seemed perfect here and gave a vivid idea of the scene happening.

Gr8 first chapter...a good starting author....keep up😉👍👍

1st here

I'm already loving this

Ito pala yung pangalawang libro sana maganda din.

infinte sukyomi😅😅

🙏

daym, I could clearly imagine the scenerio

First time

I am so happy that an old man after a full life starts the story instead of a teenager getting electrocuted or hit by a car

Interesting🤗

I think this is really interesting

I feel sleepy, dunno if can continue reading....

Interesting

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

very interesting