It has its occasional funny moments which I like, then it turns darker in like a split second. Its good that the year where shin was a complete moron was skipped cuz readers might dislike him, anyway, character development good so far. Me likey
Pretty interesting story. I haven't read too much of it but it seems great so far, as of like Ch2. Keep doing good with your other works if there's ever any!
You have very good writing quality, and I love the mc's personality, even though vampire novels aren't usually my cup of tea. Would still recommend to anyone who likes them cuz 1st chapter was a good read, keep it up