ThriceReckless
I hope this isn't offensive, but may I offer some suggestions? hahshsa anyways, as there are many small grammatical errors, such as incorrect word usage and missing or misplaced punctuation marks, I recommend that you use some grammar checker apps or websites. In any case, it's an amazing story. Your work is fantastic!
It's fine, you are free to speak your mind here, I I'm not like others who start fights over "nothing" ... (hopefully next time you can give me "something" more scandalous to fight over lol)
FluffyPuppy:ah yeah I didn't think of that possibility while commenting this, my bad hahsahsha [img=faceslap]