I’ve been leaving unsolicited advice [img=faceslap] I’m really sorry 😭 how do you delete a comment here ?

ah yeah I didn't think of that possibility while commenting this, my bad hahsahsha [img=faceslap]

I hope this isn't offensive, but may I offer some suggestions? hahshsa anyways, as there are many small grammatical errors, such as incorrect word usage and missing or misplaced punctuation marks, I recommend that you use some grammar checker apps or websites. In any case, it's an amazing story. Your work is fantastic!