Comments of chapter undefined of Fate/Defiance

So Castor is the tsundere and Pollux the Kuudere of the group? I liked it, it matches and it's cute in a way.

Interesting, great job and take your time if you need it, we would hate it if you scarified your quality which is probably the best on the fanfiction part of the website and even maybe throughout it for quantity, love the interactions! Keep up the great work!

I hope Icarus keeps his hubris. He is essentially someone that follows the rule of man, living under the rule of gods. He is basically a heretic. He questions the gods constantly. He might come to understand the gods, but he is a human and his freedom is basically a lunatics struggle, if you look at the situation properly. In the age of gods, freedom is rebellion and I feel like Icarus might end up like a lucifer type figure for the olympians and end up demonised for his actions, or end up in tragedy, as the original Icarus did. As a servant his legend might be about his struggle to attain freedom or it might be about his arrogance to try and control his life fully and be without the gods influence whether they are blessings or curses.

I hope there will have a jump in time soon and the Mc is right to improve these relations and these melee skills (Castor et Pollux will help a lot on that)

Thanks for the chapter and the interaction between the characters, Pollox is cute. It really adds to the experience.

really hope after the end the author gives us some extras of the mc as a servant in the Holy grail war and chaldea interacting with other servants and how his legend has changed the world or how the servants and others see his legend

from what I have seen so far he can be a Saber since he is learning the sword, Lancer since he wants to learn everything and probably every weapon as well, Rider because well can he be a rider because of his wings I think he can and also Paimon, then there is Berserker when he was facing Paimon's brethren he showed potential for one, Caster because divine words learning, Archer because of again wanting to learn all of the weapons and obviously because of his bow, and finally I am not sure about assassin because he has shown almost no assassin like behavior so far maybe in the future with his gadgets but so far no, To sum it all up he can be all classes except assassin and I dunno about foreigner

only as a backup idea why don't the goddesses give offerings to have certain backups as in the case of hestia such as certain items that are associated with their symbol or representative animal such as a torch with a danmachi emblem or pajamas from the future with a theme of donkey in different colors or hair accessories

thanks for the quality chapter! hope to see updates more frequently

Good chapter. they are what you would expect from warrior royalty and honestly Castor would totally be like this with an apology cuz he's not used to interacting with outsiders. Pollux is a big sister who is the brain of the two so of course she would force him to apologize.

thx for the chapter chupapi 🥰. btw do u have discord authorchan?

I thought of this recently but what if he forges legendary weapons that could be like only one that goes to make their dreams into reality and has conquered this city (Athens) can pull this sword out for Iskander aka Alexander the great and others maybe thus getting more noble phantasms in the grind even after his death and inspiring future generations

Author, what is the new update schedule?

Thanks for the chapter :))

Thanks for the chapter

Good Chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Two things, Firstly I just thought of a question I should address, since it said that Icarus in his previous life knew about Nasuverse and was a fan of it, does he know the potential of pure skill, Secondly, I have realized when in deep meditation (was just very bored) that there is a very big foreshadowing about Icarus that I will not say because of obvious reasons, and if you are thinking about it, no I am not talking about his father