theMadLad
I have nothing to say about this chapter that incredible simply incredible since the fight was really epic on all the method used to defeat this cursed bird, but without them how Hercules will be able to reach atlas?? and frankly I think Athena and Artemis will start to appreciate it (even if I don't appreciate this two manipulative and cruel goddess of the nasuverse but the Mc can use them)
I really like what you do here. I would have liked to see Icaro as a saber considering that there are only about 2 in Greece, but not bad as Archer, I just hope that at some point you give him melee combat ability, most of the servants have compatibility with other classes, Heracles is compatible with 6 of the basics (except caster) so seeing him create other weapons would be great too. I hope you don't make it too Batman, I mean, a hero of intelligence and strategy is great, the last thing I want is for Icaros to defeat the gods with a Batman-style plan, one thing the main character should learn is that there are things he just doesn't They can be controlled and that's it. fanfiction is already full of garys stues. I'm telling you, you're not going to get original if you make Icarus defeat the gods, just make him roll with them.
another banger of a chapter and the author wasn't lying when he said he would bring the heat he definitely did. but I have a question for you after reading this chapter, I mean you are planning on having Icarus go under Charon's tutelage, so I'm gonna ask you is our Mc gonna have a strength and technic boost to the point of it being relevant in his stats? cause although I like the intelligent build it really won't help the Mc overcome his fate without some type of over-the-top power like Hercules' strength or some hax weapon
you know i have a crazy idea about Icarus future as a Heroit spirit like A skill or noble phantasm Like make a miracle happen or make the impossible to possible the most unlikely thing to happen to be in happening hes legend saying he always do the impossible like how he dis Hercules sixth Labor when he was just 8 years old that will a BeastBuster like Arthur Pendragon hunting the best of humanity