Comments of chapter undefined of Fate/Defiance

Thanks for the chapter. The narration feels more fluid compared to the original, the explanation of icarus' late intervention as well as Perdix's anger against Daedalus gives the scene more meaning.

This is a much better version than the last one,it’s more flushed out and less rushed.There was a reason that he actually snapped due to the other’s words,your writing is improving keep it up

A very unique insult, I liked it. I wonder if Athena noticed Icarus looking at her.

Very good

goddess athena

Thanks for the chapter

All that training and he's still weaker then his father an inventor? Is his father using roids?

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

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I thought he was working out. I guess if he was serious, he would've tried knocking out Daedalus head with a rock. Better to write about Daedaelus sneaking into Perdix's house at night and murdering him in bed. Would've made it more shocking, since probably main character would be the only one to piece together the clues.

Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

Thanks for the chapter

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Gracias por el capítulo 👍

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Love how there is a greek phrase for that

wooow this.....this is something else