Comments of chapter undefined of The villainess shall be mine

I love the story, but I think the dialogues are a bit stiff. I suggest breaking some dialogues up in the middle every now and then so it doesnt just turn into a wall of speech. For example: "That's great," I replied calmly, showing a hint of excitement. "Lately, I've been thinking about it too" Ocassionally making the characters do things like smiling or looking at each other also helps making the conversation seem more normal than just being calm all the time. I also don't know if it's the mc's nature but I dont think a son and father would talk to each other formally. Perhaps 'Dad' or 'Mom' or even first names would make them seem closer, unless it's the mc's nature to be really chill and respectable to his parents, in which case, it suits him perfectly. I love how the plot is progressing, no problems there👌

Thanks for the chap

The Pov changes are always interesting

Thanks for the chapter, This story type of story what I'm missing where the type story that makes me want to know the next chapter.

Thanks for the chapter!

I have made some adjustments as suggested. Hope it will be mote more enjoyable now 😊

nunca gostei dessa coisa de se mostrar para o mundo, só trás atenção indesejada