Comments of chapter undefined of Teen Mage in Teen Wolf

Yesssss

great chapter, just the right amount of dark element and a good choice introducing goblins as the first contact of the new supernatural, they are one of the punching bags of the universe

I felt it forced in parts, the MC has a physique superior to a human, if you add that he can strengthen it with magic, it would be like Captain America, so I think I should have finished them easily, I know his behavior is suitable for someone who was normal until recently, I like that he had the resolution to kill the girls, good chapter.

that took a turn. went from slightly dark to goblin slayer goblin scene dark

I mean you’re adding different monsters into teen wolf some of those monsters have dark backstories this sort of thing is going to happen, curious of what you will add next.

govlin slayer vibes

Good chapter, i just hope this changes his personality and behaviour. Not that it's bad mind you, but experiencing for the first time a traumatic event like this would surely change someone.

That was DARK

vampires and ghosts are coming next... hopefully, we don't see a twilight kinda vampire.

at this point he should desperately be trying to get anyone he loves on the power train.... given that this is the outcome of being powerless also kind of needs to breed a hate of all things monster considering his originally sensitive snarky persona.

Idk, not a fan personally. Don’t understand the need to add more darkness to a TEEN drama, especially since there is already murders. And if you did vamps or ghosts I’d be ok, but goblins? They feel way too out of place when the show is mostly about shifters. Idk I just can’t get behind goblins in a Modern setting.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter.

so you added goblins in the teen wolf lore?

Thank you for the chapter

nice work

Thanks for the chapter

thx for the chap