Quade_The_Unknown
I don't think harem is a problem and teen wolf is mostly drama too even like the relationships(the sexual or lover one, not the family kind) are like not constant. They love and then like another one. So you could may be take that route and end it in a love triangle (with Mcxgirlxgirl, not the other one). There by getting teen drama[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
finally we have reached canon..and I have officially caught up...Good thing I stocked up the chapters...if I was reading and waiting for a new chapter every day I would have quit before even reaching the 5th chapter...kind of glad I didn't...really looking forward to where you are going with this dear author
I honestly wouldn't have minded if it was a harem, you seem capable enough in your writing and story-telling to be able to manage two or three girls at the same time. You said a chapter or two ago that, you wouldn't do training chapters, but I honestly tend to find them enjoyable, and in a way calming, they also allow readers to understand where the character is power wise. When it comes to being constructive... I think you need to re-read or put the chapter through grammarly before you post, could even have someone else read it beforehand; There are times where I'm completely immersed in the story, but that immersion is broken when I have to re-read a sentence or word because of a small mistake. Overall though, good stuff, I'm really enjoying the story and hope you finish it.