Comments of chapter undefined of HP: What would you do if you were Snape in his time at Hogwarts?

More than half the chapter was her just recounting what happened the other chapters...

I have a question and a note... The action is that reiterating past events is annoying for the reader, whether or not it is convenient, because it makes the chapter shorter than it is and leaves them unsatisfied and the question is whether the main character he won't go to the US because he was really looking forward to that trip QwQ...

In my humble opinion I think the love interest would be Narcissa x Snape x Hermione

One thing I don't like about the story is that you keep repeating things that already have been stated a lot

I don't understand why MC is Hermione's dog. Little or nothing matters the ring of a family without assets, wealth and a single member. Actually, the level of importance that Mc gives to it is stupid.

as a reading member of this fanfic I am forced to match them "severus and hermione" +1 thanks for the chapter

You're making it a little too easy for Hermione to get what she wants. I think you should have included some negotiation to make it easier for the readers to swallow instead of just, "oh arguing is a hassle, okay you can be part of the family". Can't wait for the plot to finally begin, the repeating of feeling was a little boring.

I still find this mini arc tiring, but I wait for the sequel to the story

As others have said should have negotiated. Also America is really against mugguls or nomagics tough they don’t care about blood. This is because the Salem with hunts. Also looking forward to seeing more.

author dragging the chapter with same content.

Is he ever gonna call her out on being from the future? With his memories of Marcus(?) it's should be obvious that's from the future.

Well, this is it for me. I can't read anymore of this story... Between the constant repetitions of information to the point that two sentences in a dialogue requires several chapters, and the blatant lack of intelligence on the mc, this story is pretty much a waste of time. Goodbye.

with ever chap my dislike for Herwankmione increases

Gracias por el capítulo 👌👍

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Yes, it is true that I made it easy and it may have been my mistake. The truth is that at the time I tried to put myself in Severus's place more than what I wanted and I thought that he wanted the inheritance of the Princes so much and it was a huge help to obtain the inheritance, I did not give importance to what Hermione asked since it was quite insignificant when you see it from that general point of view, Severus ended up gaining too much with that deal and it cost him very little, it is true that he had everything in his favor, but if I was him, I would prefer to maintain a good relationship with an unknown that I don't know if it could be from the future or from the family. Sorry if I don't answer all the comments, the work eats up a lot of my time and I answer the ones I see. Greetings and thanks for the comments.

I thank you for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter 🤠

thanks for the chapter