Magecrafter
this... this doesn't make any sense, from what was said it takes 100 thousand particles to form a nucleus, right? if he manages to form 120 in one day and he said that his proficiency would improve, even if he could only get 100 a day it would take 1000 days to form a nucleus, so it would be at most 3 years!!
there is a problem that I often find in the works of authors. That problem is "Person details". Until this moment I don't know what the mc's mother looks like and nothing has been written about the father's appearance. It bothers me not to have a mental visualization of characters in the story, at least the most important ones.
If I am not wrong he was able to collect around 120 mana particles in his 3rd day and to create a mana core he stated one needs 100000 particles so if I were to calculate on basis of him collecting 120 particles without improving even a little even then he would need around 3 years to form a mana core
the problem i have is that he saud he didnt want to stand out and wanted to hide his secrets so how will he be op since he has mediocre talent if he is then better than everyone than thats a huge flag and will attract loads of attention and would lead to people investigating him or trying to kill him