Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System
Reborn: I'm A Dragon Girl With An OP System
invayne
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Alright a review somewhat Magic - in this the magic is based on runes to guide inform the mana of the task, runic calculations which hasn’t been fully dived into but as the novel is still new this isn’t much of a problem(if anything this would be more of an extra than anything) tho it would be nice to see her create some of her own spells, and lastly a keyword which activates the magic circle that the runes create World Building - Can’t say much as of now as still to early but what we do know is that our MC is kinda screwed as she lives in a human kingdom (which makes sense considering her parents and brother are humans) which heavily discriminate against Demi humans of any kind but luckily the kingdom in which she lives in doesnt do slavery like some others but if there not talented/ strong will be looked down upon Character Development - the main characters that have truly been given the most development is Faith (our adorable dragon girl) and her brother which makes sense as one’s the main character and the other is always besides the other one tho it’s still no as developed but that also makes sense as it’s still to early Plot - so far it’s pretty much mc wants to get strong simply so she won’t be looked down upon and be able to protect those she cares about (tho I wonder if there are summon heroes in this world as that would be an interesting way to meet her friend again) in the prologue there was mentioned a war and how she was going to fight 1 against 100,000 (i dont remember the size of army but u get the point) Overall the author has simply made a very intriguing masterpiece (tho just out off curiosity will u be continuing Trinity System or rewriting it or something)
Something I'd like to know, and that it makes sense for MC to ask is about other dragonkin. She constantly gets told about humans discriminating about demi humans, so it would make the most sense to one day move to a demi human kingdom. Getting a feel for how others treat her race, what demi humans (elves, dwarves, beast men,...) react to her specific race and what other nonhuman kingdoms are in the vicinity of theirs should be important for her to ask. It's also been said dragons disappeared leaving only dragonkin behind. Are those rare? Is there maybe even a whole kingdom of them somewhere?
I like it, I don't really know how to make reviews. But I can tell you that I like it so far. As long as it does not go down the lazy-ass protagonist route. Would be nice if she keeps trying to better herself. Basically very ambitious, maybe like how it was mentioned earlier she takes over the kingdom that attacked her( first paragraph of first chapter ig). Thank you for updating, would be really pleased to see this novel not getting dropped (nor eternal hiatus) thank you very much. I look forward to future chapters.
