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Comments of chapter undefined of (NEW FANFIC) In MHA with DnD Spells?

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Four_Clover
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Kind of contradictive going by him being raised by the hero that taught All Might, not showing hints of psychopathy in the earlier chapters and his childhood, and being capable of teasing and interactions with other characters, I don't see why the Main Character who is aspiring as a hero, training to he a hero, kill someone just because he wants to impress a deranged killer. Also, wasn't he a victim of bullying, that's why he did a school of shooting? Why TF would he murder a girl when that girl is being killed by a blood sucking killer who is worse than a bully? This is a completely useless chapter that basically trashes the present lighthearted tone and the Main Character's development. As things go I don't think I will like the development of the MC so I will leave. I hope you can be consistent and manage the tone shift in your future chapters.

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Liam_Neeson
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I honestly don’t understand why every one and their mom seems to love Toga. To me she’s just a deranged psychopath that should just be locked up or put down.

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BattleKing10000
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He could have just healed her and Erased her memory but no, now people will be looking out for a murderer.

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aman10
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SolomonMumuDoom
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Great. I thought that the main character will re-educate the villain.

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Fausto_Neto_4680
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I didn't read the prologue, since you said that the prologue was brutal, it's useless, and I didn't want to see something brutal for free, so for me this chapter doesn't make any sense, it breaks all immersion in the character I was having so far .

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DaoistDark
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Dude why don't you just delete the prologue? It's way to soon after what just happened and most importantly serves zero purpose in this story. You could remove the chapter and there wwould be no change to the story or his character. Theere is no reason for it to exist.

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hyperlevin
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I don't like toga

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Lol_2050
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Thanks for the chapter. How big will the harem be?

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Ryofu
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After thinking a little, the MC might have used his ilusion on that one, since he like using it, it wouldn't be strange. Using illusion to make Toga think he killed the women while he healed her and erased her memory, would be more accurate to his caracter than just killing someone out of nowhere xD.

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recon100035
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thanks for the chapter

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Leyxs
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psycho-yandere. which edition of d&d hi author takes the spells?

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Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

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Dark_Soulsbestgame
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Nice

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Flightless_Man
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Thanks for the chapter

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Angledark
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Good Chapter

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ViniDrako23
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Thanks for the chapter

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Jokan
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Gracias por el capítulo

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BattleKing10000
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Thanks for the Chapter

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ArdaPendragon
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Thanks for the chapter.