Comments of chapter undefined of Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime
Global Symbiotes: My Symbiote Is A Slime
Blue Soft Dough
Chapter comments12
ah yes, now we seem to be missing the devour sequence... along with the abilities that came with it... must've just been my imagination. Ok... let me be serious here... it's a decent idea... but the execution is improper. There has to be consistency... especially if it's a system based novel. But alas there is already bits and pieces of the novel that aren't consistent with previously mentioned scenarios. The poison immunity, yet still being affected by poison is 1 example. (Immunity means unaffected by) The skill hasn't been explored at all nor properly explained. There's also the lack of the character actually using the system when necessary, even though it was stated several times before "I can go far cause I have a system"(not exact phrasing but close enough). So... you tell me. Am I in the wrong choosing to stop here? I've read enough to determine some things won't change. And in doing so I've also come to the conclusion that this novel would be more infuriating to me, than satisfying if I were to continue reading. It interests me, don't get me wrong... it's got potential if it's fixed up, but that wouldn't work due to how much has already been implemented into the story. And unfortunately the overall quality deters me. Keep up the work though, I'm sure plenty people will look past these issues, so don't give up.
