Comments of chapter undefined of Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
EvansKannon
Chapter comments131
As a reader that started the book today and made it to the start of this arc in almost one breath, I can honestly understand why many people got so upset with you. Imo, you had a great thing going in marvel as far as character interactions and story development, and abruptly jumping into this "temporary" setting for such a long, long time was totally unnecessary. From the very first chapter of the arc you had already set all he needed in perfect place, stealing the All for One, the One for All and a few more quirks, I didn't even mind the mc going all flamboyant fake villain with a plan or something like that, but when I saw that you actually invested 10 of such long and extensive chapters into a throwaway setting that he should never touch again and, from what I've red, go as far as lose his V card AND leave a possible kid with some of his powers behind, ngl, I made me somewhat upset. In my opinion the whole boku thing should have lasted 3 chapters top, with the first one being the set up, and one or 2 as a summary of actions and development like "I went there, stole/copied this and that" ecc. ecc., explaining which ability he trained among his character cards, and immediately getting back to doing proper character development and interactions in the main marvel universe, all this chapter investment in a throwaway world just makes me reluctant to read and makes me regret all the plot advancement he could have had in his vengeance for his parents and in starting some proper relationship with long lasting marvel character female leads, especially knowing that your "free time" was running out and now the releases will be sporadic, it stings even more. Maybe I'm in the wrong, but as far as I'm concerned, he should have just taken everything he could from that world without any consideration or meaningful interaction whatsoever with its character and move on asap, almost as if going through a shopping list on the internet. The fact that you made it that long and added a lot of character development into it makes me feel like I won't understand the story or the MC anymore if I don't read it and combined with the fact that I do not approve of the amount of attention and time that you dedicated to it almost pushes me away from the novel altogether unfortunately.
don't listen to those 1 star reviews, they are just cultists. they always want to see that op alpha male mc who takes all the women and is a murder hobo with a bad cultivation protagonist personality. on the other hand I love your story haven't seen a essence gacha before. Also If you are thinking about moving platforms i recommend Questionable Questing.
Another idea I had is about the force. IN Star Wars the force is everywhere but there is no force in mcu. So it can be replaced as comic energy manipulation cuz it is everwhere in marvel but only certain individuals can manipulate it. Or it can become his own force/energy tank/ odin force inside himself where in the future after he assimilates Loki and gains Loki’s divinites it can spark his own divinty of power and make him a god. Pretty powerful god cuz he is above omega level mutant like Franklin and Franklin was a multiversal level power.
I said in the former chapter, and the MC knows more than enough of biology to assume, or at least reach the conclusion or some kind of probability, that he left a child behind. If she was pregnant then the MC, the readers and the author know that he left his "substance" inside. If he is not considering that, or he didn't use some kind of Quirk to avoid pregnancy, then the MC is just escaping of that "problem" if we can call having descendants as a problem. Also, if he is ignoring that probability, then he is committing abandonment. On the other hand, the MC doesn't know if his reality is true, what does that even mean? If it is not true, or cannot be proven to be true, then why is struggling? After all, is like God in our world, it could exist or not, but human still need to live their lives. If he can't prove that it is true, then he just need to live, period. After all, he cannot do anything to prove it, he can just leave to his fullest and try to not get regrets, like committing abandonment of his child because he didn't consider probabilities or used a preservative. His genius mind was not working in that moment Not a critic, just a mere opinion of someone that believes that the MC did everything good except for not considering the probability of pregnancy, and I don't know why. I am even thinking that he left his child on purpose for some reason that will be said in future chapter, if not he is just stupid.
