Comments of chapter undefined of The villainess and her Advisor conquers everything.

I may be a little late in commenting, but this is really good. Since I am a basic reader though, I don't think I can suggest anything that can improve the writing. In my perspective, this doesn't seem to have any flaws whatsoever 👍

So far the story is a little slow. I don't really feel anything from the MC except I get this 'emotionless' vibe from him. If that's what you are going for then great. If not, try going into more detail about how he is feeling. For example, instead of telling: 'He is sad because he lost all his friends.' Try: 'At the thought of losing his friends, his heart ached and pained filling his eyes with tears as they streamed down his face.' It shows us how sad he actually is.