hey author story is nice and love it but try writing in different manner don't star with "" in some paragraph and try using first letter capital One in certain places it will be more presentable in reading I am supporting with power stones keep it up ☺
author book is nice just add a romance like power couple and make mc character more like villan and some Scheming it will look good and give us some action😌🙏 i will support you with power stones and will see how this novell goes keep it up