Leaving_Life
Does anyone know any other teen wolf stories where the protagonist is not a dominated person who does everything he wants from the beginning?
why do I get d feeling that since you released this 'girls-POV' chapter you are going to attempt to stretch this drama Author-san. I get that the Teen-Wolf franchise is heavy on d drama and teen angst but seriously dilute it a lot, majority are more interested in the supernatural abilities and shenanigans with a sprinkling of "drama"
I hope you either pick one of them and stick to your choice, or pick both and don't be wishy washy. You clearly plan on having one of them, or both, as the FL(s), but the drama is a little tiring. And despite what they've done so far I enjoy their characters for the most part. I just hope this doesnt turn into one of those novels with 10+ romance partners and endless drama. Anyway, thanks for the chapter.
Like the chapters, hate Jackson, and strongly dislike Scott. I get the explanation for Lydia, I guess, she's just used to wearing a mask and putting up walls or whatever, but you're kinda making Allison out to be a cuddle-hoe. I still hope he gets one or both of them, but I think that Allison won't realize Scott isn't right for her until she finds out he's a werewolf. Also I hope he punches Jackson at least once.
His relationship with these two is just too toxic. First one doesn't even see anything wrong with dating another man while sleeping in another ones arms. The other one is just keep acting her role in the world she created for herself. If Lydia was in the real world and not some character in a fictional world, she would be one of those girls your family and friends warn you about so you could keep away. If you didn't and tried to correct her, you would be the one hurt. Because, in my eyes, anyone saying they can change their partners character is in for alot of hurt. Finally, these girls belong to the streets my brothers.
I think thIs is implying the the story of the world is subtlEy affecting the girls Forcing them to play certain roles Thats how i like to think of them at least Because no Normal person has thoughts in this why while not showing the outward signs that would have been described All i can do is hope that this arc of emotions comes To a better comclusion then him cutting them off As it would Make no sence For Him to even be part of the story if hes not conected to these two
Allison is just a walking contradiction at this point. Dating ryan was too soon for her but dating scott was ok? She really seems to like ryan and feels that she needs him more than scott but at the same time she needs to give scott a chance? This whole chapter doesn't really give the girls some justice with their actions. I'll still continue to read though, but this chapter overall was just useless. Thanks for the chapters though!