mark_kiple
Thanks for the chapter! A simple and straight forward resolution to the situation. But I really want to hit that stupid dragon in the nuts! Several times! But it is also good to see that Lyanna at least begins understand the consequences of her actions and are willing to take responsibility - how things goes moving forward, we will have to wait and see. I'm also glad to see that Arthur chose his sister and Dorne and that he survived his choice. Looking forward to reading much more!
excellent, I'm interested in seeing where you take this. I'm so concerned about how you will be introduced more modern tec into the game of thrones world like rifles muskets and cannons I feel as technology is becoming to modern to fast as this is a medival society and suddenly there is already black powder muskets and cannons. I think some of these things are coming in to quickly, but I also understand this is a fanfiction and so you the author can do what you want. excellent story keep up the good work.