Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn as a warp god with a warp system in Warhammer 40k
Reborn as a warp god with a warp system in Warhammer 40k
Dez_Burns
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Return of the Lord of Cosmic Light and his quicksilver army just waiting to destroy anyone who would dare despise him!!!
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I just finished binge reading this, the idea of a being of the warp is interresting and i would read it just for that, still the quality makes it hard to understand, sometimes the choice of words feel wrong. I would like some more detail in some parts for example in last chapter i'd like a little more explanation on the "last hit" becouse at this moment i'm not sure if the ctan was wounded just from the material power of the hammer as in was hit very hard or from some kind of firy explosion and the fire itself was a bonun or just from friction or maybe the fire was more like burning the soul, another example from earlier chapter when Mc was getting ready to save Isha did he check if he had the time or did he just assume...? Also Mc keeps acting differently like in his realm he acts like a medieval lord but when in battle he shouts like a teen would, if this change of character is intentional i feel like at least some inner monologue explaining his train of thought would be nice. Anyway this is becoming too long, I like it, I want more, Sir or Madam Author Please let me know if more critique is welcome
