Hello this is a checkpoint, it can help you remember where you stopped reading
what is happening to your book?
there should not be any " "
it isn't clear who though it, maybe use ' ' or make it clear who sayed what in the future, like the pov's.
please write out the POV changes.
Oh, nice. Wish you good development and health. And ill wait in webnovel for it, so I could binge read. But anyway thank you for not dropping it yet.
at tier 2*
read my comment, it should be the right one
i just commented it, i think. it should be this one.
Estonia ? Made the name up or had some inspiration from world countries?
If something can go wrong, it will - Murphy`s Law