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Golden_Gamer_7564

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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_75646h
    Commented

    you are repeating things multiple times. like about the orcs

    Ch 36 Against the Greenskins (1)
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    Star Citizen Online: Isekai Edition
    Sci-fi · Trafford
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_75647h
    Commented

    a lot of grammar mistakes.

    Ch 25 Destruction of the Solar Cult (1)
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    Star Citizen Online: Isekai Edition
    Sci-fi · Trafford
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_75648d
    Commented

    maybe use ko fi/fe(don't remember) instead?

    Ch 28 Chapter twenty-eight: [Interlude] Webs Are Spun (II)
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    ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
    TV · Marcia_05
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
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    idea(s): * Have the MC build gates to other worlds. * Advance the civilisation to space age * Maybe there could be another continent where the mc could travel *nether portal, the end portal

    Ch 22 Chapter Twenty-two: Even Rome Has Fallen
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    ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
    TV · Marcia_05
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_75649d
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    tftc

    Ch 89 Not to be Tied down
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    The Architect [Solo Leveling]
    Anime & Comics · 5imply_lucid
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756416d
    Replied to TrojanRabbit

    Hey! Have you dropped your novel called "the world forger"? If not when is the next update going to come out? I would like to say that I liked your novel and hope that you will continue to write it. All the best to you M

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    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
    Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756416d
    Commented

    when more chapters?

    Ch 66 Short Hiatus
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    The World Forger
    Anime & Comics · TrojanRabbit
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756417d
    Replied to justadkx

    Me reading this thread be like:

    Ch 8 A DEAL WITH THE RING
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    Batman x Arc Reactor
    Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756417d
    Commented

    mor

    Ch 18 The Order
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    The Immortal in Star Wars
    Anime & Comics · DaoistRUH792
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
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    They changed from small ships into baby Predacons effectively. He named them Predaking, Rampage, Devestator, Grimlock, and Grendel. Very quickly the 5 small Predacons as he was calling them were changing to suit his desire.
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    The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756421d
    Replied to Houssem

    hmhmm Warhammer 40K

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    Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction
    Anime & Comics · Houssem
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756421d
    Commented

    bru

    Ch 13 (R18) Silk Spectre's surrender~
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    Be The Superheroes' Father in Marvel X DC universe
    Fantasy · DreamWalker2023
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756421d
    Commented

    maybe use less emojis's(personal preference)? Other than those, its's a great novel.

    Ch 4 (R18) The Beginning of the Beast!
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    Be The Superheroes' Father in Marvel X DC universe
    Fantasy · DreamWalker2023
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756423d
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    Ch 51 Alexandra’s Debut -49
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    Marvel: The Foundation
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756423d
    Commented

    what happened to the quality ?

    Ch 44 In the Spy’s Web -42
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    Marvel: The Foundation
    Movies · Darkstar_crow
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756423d
    Commented

    Could mention Overkill less. It has been mentioned quite a few times in a short period.

    Ch 43 Strategic Facades -41
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    Marvel: The Foundation
    Movies · Darkstar_crow
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756424d
    Commented

    was -> were (in the past) or are (present, but sounds better than was)

    The list was filled with names that Alex remembered from before his move into this world. Though, many of those names he had little idea of who there truly was. He knew that some of them was connected to the Darkhold, which was enough to earn his attention.
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    Marvel: The Foundation
    Movies · Darkstar_crow
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756424d
    Commented

    *were

    Yet clearly there was some differences between this world and the cannon MCU. What these differences was, he didn't know. However it did mean he had to be on guard for the unexpected.
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    Marvel: The Foundation
    Movies · Darkstar_crow
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756424d
    Commented

    I would like to recommend "HammerTime" from royal road to you. Could take some inspiration from there.

    Ch 8 The shadow of SCP-169 -7
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    Marvel: The Foundation
    Movies · Darkstar_crow
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  • Golden_Gamer_7564
    Golden_Gamer_756424d
    Commented

    scp 006

    Ch 6 Unexpected system ping. -5
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    Marvel: The Foundation
    Movies · Darkstar_crow
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