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Comments of chapter undefined of Alpha Winston's Hated Luna

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Alpha Winston's Hated Luna

rey_bacolod

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DaoistjeSOXc
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just like me pls😍

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rey_bacolodAuthorrey_bacolod

Hello DaoiztjeSOXc, thank you for your comment. I do not know what you were referring to, but thank you for reading my novel.

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Kristy_Love
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Starting to worry about the language it's as if English is the Arthor 2nd language .

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Ella_Waiwaiole
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Some of the writing does not make sensr

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Bernadette_Ashe
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I love the story and reading it but I think it needs some proofreading and replacement of the wording,

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Bernadette_Ashe
Bernadette_AsheLv3Bernadette_Ashe

I love the story and reading it but I think it needs some proofreading and replacement of the wording,

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Maizatul_Zakaria_6812
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Don't Author don't make yourself into a TIZZY. A GOOD STORYLINE will do it's work to pull in the READER

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