She deserves what she dished out

It’s about time she wises up

Maybe his mother or lover once upon a time

This would be the greatest revenge against her old man.

This really should be good

Interesting

Lol very funny and intriguing, I can’t stop laughing and reading

😆 loving the story now. Great creative writing.

Smart girls and lazy knights. Great story of surviving and writing of complete paragraphs and sentences.

It would have been nice if all of the paragraphs had the complete endings.

Lol poor old Nick, close your mouth before all of the flies fly in. 😝😝😝😝😝

Very very nice hot and steamy

Very very nice hot and steamy

Now the story is really getting interesting.

The story is pretty good so far with the exception of missing word(s) at the end of some of the paragraphs at the beginning.

I’m so in love with Kora. Great imagination and story telling.

She is adorable but grown. Loving the story so far.

Glad that Bernice finally got what she deserved. Public humiliation.

I really hate that this arrogant bimbo has my mother’s name, Very good imaginative writing.

Intriguing, funny and riveting. Great imigation and story telling. I just can’t wait to see what happens next.