SHEOGORATH
I am wondering if this 4th year isn't taking too much time. More than 30 chapters have been dedicated those 4 months, if I remember correctly. I know you want to take it slower, and the first years were a bit more for context planting, plus Magnus is blooming now, but it still feels elongated for not enough reasons for some chapters now. The teasing between the lovers is funny, but multiple chapters of nearly only this is too much in my humble opinion. It would be more fitting to have this novel in the romance category now if there is only ever romance in the chapters. Well, I'm sure you'll smooth it all out, but I want to see some alchemy and spells and crafts, and then the action, you know ? Or just he leaves to France and cares not for the debacle of self-fulfilling prophecies, but I want to get there ! :D Let's go Let's go !!