Comments of chapter undefined of Incarnation system : angel of wisdom as system warden
Incarnation system : angel of wisdom as system warden
Sinful_God
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NormLLv3NormL
It's a bit confusing, especially the descriptions of the new world. The story was also sightly heard to read, but that's becuase the chapter needs a bit of editing or a read through. Otherwise it's a good plot, so yey.
NormLLv3NormL
Sinful_God:It's just, what can you expect from a computer science major. Sorry but I write because I want to create my own universe and it's hard to keep check on what you are writing when their is that moment you think of something perfect. please keep supporting me and thanks for your suggestion I will try to improve myself. đđ