I loved the story. The Main Character was well fleshed out, showcased realistic and believable reactions to the events of the story and was well written. The side characters drew me in and their interactions kept me engaged in the story. The plot itself was well thoughout and flowed well. While their were a lot of time skips, that's was to be expected of a story in a management setting. I only wish the original author didn't drop the story 😭.

The Ghost System is a wonderful story, with potential to be one of the best on webnovel. I do wonder why the last three chapters are locked even though Knightly hasn't updated in over a year?

Trial Reads only give you the first 40 chapters. If you want to read more, look for the raw text.

Love the girls, but the really know how to dampen the mood, don't they?

Heavens Wrath. Considering the lightning was golden, that seems appropriate 😅

Random enlightenment is always the most fun type. That's how it should be, not forced by a plant or other object.

They were at Earth for a while, and clothes seem to last forever as long as they aren't destroyed in battle. As for why, I can only guess personal preference.

Did the chapters get shorter, or am I just getting faster at reading? 🤔

Bros mutations really pulling out all the stops for these? What was the potential of that orb.

I think it's less of a buff and more of a change in biology, as the God's Path system thinks it's a different type of monster. Or at least something like that

Author probably forgot, or wants to establish her power again?

If I remember correctly, doesn't he have a way to speed up her hibernation?

Her second form makes her better looking, stronger and have to enter hibernation after its over

I'm pretty sure he can't mutate the same thing more than once, so he wouldn't be able to mutate another house talisman.

Haha, no problem, writing is something you can get better at just by doing it.

It's a bit confusing, especially the descriptions of the new world. The story was also sightly heard to read, but that's becuase the chapter needs a bit of editing or a read through. Otherwise it's a good plot, so yey.

There's a mall, he just doesn't use it.

Never mind. I managed to remove it by clearing the cache on the app.

A few issues with perspective. Some sentences swap between using he and my randomly. The Ai was introduced before the MC, which while a bit strange, still worked. I would advise editing the first few chapters, after all, these first chapters are what hook readers and make them want to continue reading. The premise of the story was good though 😁.

That's oddly cute, I think?