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Comments of chapter undefined of The legend of The crying shinobi (Naruto)

finalgetsuga
finalgetsugaLv1finalgetsuga

All over the place please fix it ill drop it you keep on putting flashbacks and Flash present that I get confused on where the story is headed so please fix this because as of right now it's very terrible and hard to read

Games_of_Karma
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don't worry In next chapters flashbacks are Way less in quantity and Writing quality. I will Edit these chapters in my Free time in this week

Ripperdoc12
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looking good so far