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Comments of chapter undefined of Dual System: Ascension of A Nameless Nobody

Primus42
Primus42Lv5Primus42

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TheAncientOnell
TheAncientOnellLv5TheAncientOnell

the author had to make a stupid introverted kid to have hero complex for foolish reasons in a world full of monsters by the looks of it he ain't going to change...a total let down...this book slightly had potential now I doubt it.

edu_rodeiro
edu_rodeiroLv15edu_rodeiro

aaaa the good old complex hero. ... and I thought I had it bad with 8th grade syndrome. .. .

Daoist_Red_Reads
Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4Daoist_Red_Reads

Ah so he does not have hero complex but he is a hero archetype that's done badly? In my opinion he is unbearable because his back story isn't done well. If his back story was explained at chapter 1 to maybe 3 as to why he became a neet instead of being a mentioned at a later chapter he wouldn't be that bad. The back story felt more like an on the spot excuse rather than a reason as to why he is like this. Also the perverted thoughts ain't right if he has heroic aspirations, limit these thoughts to social scenarios only rather than making them the reason the mc makes to save others.

Onibaba
OnibabaLv3Onibaba

A

Nameless_Thug_A
Nameless_Thug_ALv1Nameless_Thug_A

I feel like I read something infinitely similar to this in scribblehub, but with different names

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thanks for the chap