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FELL OUT! IT'S NOT HIATUS!

Marcelly_Cris

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DanteSSSx00
DanteSSSx00Lv10DanteSSSx00

Your work itself is good, but I lost interest for two reasons, one... you put this girl disguised as a man to create some kind of hideous mystery, I hate that kind of thing, and the second reason... You're still reincarnated. the disgrace called Nie Li, I don't read fanfics that still show the disgrace of the mc from the original work, this is disgusting. And from what I can see, you will also make your mc become Nie Li's puppy and in the end turn your mc into a Nie Li's C.o.c.k Suker! So I'd rather stop reading, good luck.

2yr
Marcelly_Cris
Marcelly_CrisAuthorMarcelly_Cris

Thanks for trying to read at least! but unlike other stories, I wasn't even thinking about showing much of what was going on with Nie Li. Worse still wanting to fuck him.. But ok, thanks for reading!!

2yr
TijolinBR
TijolinBRLv4TijolinBR

i wish they were nie li's friends but i wish they had their own adventures without always being an adventure taken from the original. But do it your way of course

2yr
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Fahad501
Fahad501Lv5Fahad501

Why did you have him steal Nie Li's role by luring the Sacred Family against him

2yr
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Faint19
Faint19Lv13Faint19

??

2yr
Faint19
Faint19Lv13Faint19

Why is Mc’s cultivation so slow when compared to Ling Fen? I would have assumed that his soul form and techniques are much better than what the girl has, though I think hers are super rare are they better then his? I mean is he purposely slowing his cultivation for something else?

2yr
MediocreSkater
MediocreSkaterLv13MediocreSkater

I hope that Nie Lie and Qing Han can become good friends as they both have similar goals and experiences

2yr
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