Aero182
i love the story line, if i was to offer any advice, instead of doing the mass release, for those mass release times, save a few, that way you have a more steady flow on the days your not able to write you can still post a chapter (dont get me wrong. i read every one of them that comes out as i can) just my 2cents worth
I like this story a lot, and I don’t Mind this development. But, it would be super ddisappointing If this continues to have forced moments that lead to jay being discovered and stuff. He did his part really well in regards to hiding, and the logic that caused Validore to act as he did was super forced. In fact, Validore being told about it all doesn’t make sense unless the guild master was really convinced of his loyalty, as his daughters fate would be the same as Jay’s. I just don’t want another story where planning and forethought my the MC becomes irrelevant due to forced plot line shenanigans, and the MC gets forced to overcome struggles where he really shouldn’t Have to, during drawn out arcs. Also, I really hope the story can progress to him actually learning stuff and going to the school, and not have 100 chapters of him running away, or getting captured abe tortured by the mage hunters. I want to see the world developed, and it seems like until he gets to that school, he has no way of expanding his knowledge base, therefore showing the readers more about the world. I am looking forward to more, I just wanted to say that; so that hopefully you can avoid some of the pitfalls so many authors on this site seem to fall into, at least in my opinion. Thanks for all the hard work and the story so far