Comments of chapter undefined of With Love As My Witness

I think this last version was my favorite out of all of them... In the first version I thought how her study group reacted was overly immature (Outside of Chase because he was obviously upset because he liked her and liking someone often makes people of all ages do immature things), and that Jenna was too hard on Bryce once they got back in touch.

I'm so glad in every ending they all end up happy and married!!! I'm tempted to read this again but don't know if I'm ready for the water works again!!!

I love that you wrote this! I also sometimes wonder about the what-ifs in stories, and this one had several places where things would have gone very differently. Thank you 🥰🤩

I think I like a mixture of the main story and the last what-if. Clue is an excellent movie and now I want to watch it again.

Ugh, so much heartache in this one! I‘m totally using Clue to determine my headcanon ending: the last one in the home release was marked “how it really happened” and that’s what I’m going to convince myself. I’m a bit more than half-tempted to make a ranked list of all the side characters in Mcllorycat stories just to see all the people Big Bro Killian towers over, but I think a lot of characters would be upset at Ted Jenkins coming in among the top 5 or so.

Thankyou muchly! This was beautiful ❤️

Beautiful story Enjoyed every moment

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza