Comments of chapter undefined of In Harry Potter as Neville Longbottom

The beginning is not bad, in fact it is good. The only problem I have is his reaction, it doesn't feel appropriate for a 30-year-old man who endures being abandoned by his mother and watched his father die. In 30 years many things are experienced therefore his reaction feels dull and unreal, I would even say that it is forced. It is not only about emotional maturity but also about experience.

I can't really thank you enough for creating this story! I've been searching for HP fanfic in which Neville is the protagonist! Thank you!

no more squib Neville, I guess

You are my hero, I am very excited

It shouldn't happen until hes somewhere in his 1st year of life. So I expect him to bs a temp seer type deal as a baby and warn Bella curcio momma and dadda. Throw out need fidelis or some such before it happens.

Is he a brave lion that gets the girl? Cause I see no romance tag or anything in the description.

thanks for the chapter.

MC is a children

Thanks for chapter

FINALLY!! a story where the protagonist is Neville

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter

I thank you for the chapter

The pilot chapter was beautifully done!! Awaiting speedy updates 🤘

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Great chapter