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Comments of chapter undefined of The Ancient Potter Magic

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DonFrosty
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Wait really? I thought there was a lot more to go with the dark elves war and so on. You could’ve even taken it to the multi verse with how op he was going if you wanted to keep it going. I actually enjoyed reading it quite a bit, though I’m not too into the whole “whore”, “slave”, and skull-fucking to near death thing, but it was just kinky enough and the light hearted banter and slice of life outside of the bedroom was a great balance to show regardless of shit said in the bedroom they did truly care for each other. I liked a lot of the plot that went well for the “plot” on the side. Plus the writing was pretty good. Only thing I didn’t like too much, and this is personal preference and not a mark on the Authors writing skills, was how close he was tipping that line of being a actual dark lord that galavanted around r*ping whoever he pleased, but that is mostly because I see too many real humans doing really fucked up shit in the real world and I prefer more good natured, but not stupidly so, MCs. I did like how the Author wasn’t afraid to write about some more extreme kinks often overlooked (cum swapping, gag reflexes, i*cest). Plus it seems you had more plans for the series that sounded interesting. I guess more likely it was a burn out or wanting to write something else for a bit, which is understandable. Well regardless, thanks for the share and fun read!

NoName2021
NoName2021AuthorNoName2021

thanks bro :) As I already said i had considered to continue it but then again the same problem ... I'll have to make it to the higher dimensions and world . And as you may have noticed that Harry is slightly op from the starting and it was an extreme (not so far, a little bit) everytime they had s*x and to be blunt it was mostly porn-plot ... So to write much about somthing like this will make the writer as well as readers bored and tired and I don't want to do so. So when the time is ripe, Rap it up so no one would be bored ... PS:- Harry was being more influenced by the voldemort's thoughts and memories then he intially imagined he would be...he overestimated himself ...

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Ian_Emrys
Ian_EmrysLv13Ian_Emrys

Atleast do an epilogue

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AEGIR123
AEGIR123Lv4AEGIR123

Thanks, thanks, thanks, thanks, thanks, thanks for the chapter +++++++++++++++++++ more please

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cyberlector
cyberlectorLv5cyberlector

gracias por el capitulo

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Roy_Benavides
Roy_BenavidesLv12Roy_Benavides

Want to see a truly super OP Harry check out "Harry Potter The Mutant Obscurus Gamer" Anywho great story my friend. Hope you write more stuff!

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Huzy
HuzyLv13Huzy

epilogue?

Wolf_blade_99
Wolf_blade_99Lv14Wolf_blade_99

it was just hitting its stride, such a shame. could have expanded to the muggle side and did the one thing they have all tried to do in the universe in one way or another unite them..

Allaris
AllarisLv14Allaris

You could do a rewrite, follow the same story but expand on everything.