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Allaris

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I am currently writing several different series some fanfic and allot of original works, not posting on here until I am happy with my work and have a large amount of it stored up.

2021-02-03 JoinedGlobal
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  • Allaris
    Allaris1mth
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    Unleash the cannons.

    Understanding that building a city of this size would take decades and that he had plenty of time to strengthen its defenses against the darkness, Jon continued seeking allies and knowledge. It was then that the Gods revealed to him the existence of an unknown race, exiled in the nearby mountains. They were the Dwarves, men, and women of short stature but incredibly strong and endowed with a natural passion for construction and forging. Jon realized that these beings could be valuable allies in his construction and planning efforts, bringing skills and knowledge that would complement those of his own people.
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    Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
    Book&Literature · RaccoonLeague
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  • Allaris
    Allaris8mth
    Commented

    Sell it for money now and in the future reclaim it and the surrounding area for yourself if it's really important.

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  • Allaris
    Allaris10mth
    Commented

    compulsion charm

    He got up from his chair, congratulated Varko and gave him the 20,000 gold dragons prize which the old Knight humbly accepted before the whole melee came to an end.
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    HP transmigrated into Domeric Bolton (GOT and HP crossover)
    TV · Fortunate_Soul
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  • Allaris
    Allaris1yr
    Commented

    I'm about 3/4 through the original version but just saw this as it's a rewrite hopefully this will be even better.

    Ch 1 Dyon Sacharro
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    Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    You could do a rewrite, follow the same story but expand on everything.

    Ch 42 Chapter 41
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    The Ancient Potter Magic
    Book&Literature · NoName2021
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    It feels slightly rushed. Also the cup so he's not dead yet, if I had to guess he will seek out the dark elves. This has at least a few hundred more chapters to go as long as the story actually dives into the world building more.

    Ch 39 Chapter 38
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    The Ancient Potter Magic
    Book&Literature · NoName2021
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    Just great

    That was just ridiculous, everybody knows that you don't actually see imaginary friends. Isn't that right Meowtzer? I glance at the four foot tall, weirdly muscular cat standing on two legs in the corner of the cupboard. He gives me a quick nod of agreement before he opens a portal with his trusty fish bone blade and leaves to save his reality from the evil dogian menace. I doubt I'll see him again, but oh well. It was nice having a friend other than my brother while it lasted.
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    Harry Potter's Chaotic Twin
    Book&Literature · Nartleb
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    Explosion!!! Nya!

    Ch 2 Story Time!
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    Harry Potter's Chaotic Twin
    Book&Literature · Nartleb
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    I kinda guessed he would need a new wand when he went through the ritual, glad the author didn't brush this aside. With him no longer having the horcrux or been forcefully limited by the goat and having three unique legendary beasts absorbed and been able to transform into a wrym dragon. Hope the wand is unique... For example in some fan fiction the wands become one with the owner and if that was plausible in this fanfiction then a wand change is a must.

    Ch 134 Chapter 123: Magical Foci
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    Wizard King
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented
    Ch 192 Ch. 191 One last welcoming for an old man
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    Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
    Book&Literature · Alexander_the_grey
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    Honestly how on earth did the books not mention stuff like this, *sigh* when fanfiction is more realistic and more thought-out.

    Ch 12 Chapter 12: Rags to Riches
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    Wizard King
    Book&Literature · Mark_Ward
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Replied to TruckDriver

    Worth it, also amusing some people's reactions (complaints) when there were several hints and hidden jabs at certain characters. Shame more authors don't take this approach.

    Chapter 74: Childhood
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    High Human in Crossed Worlds - A HP x DxD Fic
    Book&Literature · DonnutHermit
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    Eventually I'm guessing (hoping) the summers will include shield training maybe...?

    Holiday Research
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    Magus of the Wizarding World
    Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Replied to Snake_Empress

    Is there an estimate on when new chapters will release?

    Ch 14 Harry's Darkness Pt 2
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    Harry Potter and the Gift of Kali
    Book&Literature · Snake_Empress
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    Erm... England is free health care....

    "Ok, please fill out this form and pay the admission fees."
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    Harry Potter and the Gift of Kali
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    Seriously how did he not see this coming, even if the force was blocking the shatterpoints before the explosion he should of sensed something but nope. I don't know why but author is slowly making MC dumb compared to the start of the novel.

    Ch 124 V.2-C.25│Problems in Paradise VII│
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    Star Wars: Skywalker
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Replied to SaintVulkan

    Didn't that happen in some story?

    Specifically with the Yuuzhan Vong whom would start an intergalactic war themselves way into the future.
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    Star Wars: Skywalker
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    I can see Kamil getting killed eventually either he sacrifices himself or gets killed for being a idiot.

    Ch 92 Through the Eyes of Another: The Dancer Craves a Blade [ * ]
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    I Own a Brothel in Another World
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    Introducing OP skill!

    You gain 10-50% bonus stats of a registered partner that willingly offers you their body, and they benefit from it too, for as long as any kind of positive feeling towards you resides in their soul. The bonus depends on the strength of the bond between you, but no relationship will ever reach a higher benefit than one of the mutual lovers.
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    I Own a Brothel in Another World
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  • Allaris
    Allaris2yr
    Commented

    Is this a straight copy and paste or are you improving the overall story?

    Ch 340 My Katherine
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    6 Times a Day
    Urban · Snake_Empress
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