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There ’s a flashback scene that could be separated by dots or dashes to make it less confu sing
Great beginning but quite confusing set up. Who’s Madelaine??
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Nice beginning.. quite tense. I really want to know more about what prompted the groom to not show up... let's go
Interesting🤗🤗
so lovely
nice begining love it
it's going good
names are confusing but quite interesting
interesting
very interesting
Looks interesting I like it keep it up
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Looks, Interesting I love It. .keep It up
Looks promising to me. 😏
Wow I really like did book[img=coins]
So lovely…But y is the groom not showing up on his wedding day making ppl to be mocking her wife to be 😒
am just starting but I love it nice one dear 😘
nice