Dragon15681
The chapter is good... but lately I have noticed that it is becoming more and more predictable and the character is too op, so I would like to share some ideas to see if it can be incorporated and give it more emotion, so here I leave you. go 1- Marcus creates a civilization on another planet: although it is not entirely coherent, he can say it as something he does on a whim, as he already did with a celestial system. Why not create a civilization with different DNA? It would be entertaining and may drive you a little crazy with the creations. 2- create a planet: it can be even better because you can make the Death Star 2.0 XD but you could do it by having several planets collide with each other to make your own planet to your liking. 3- become the villain: it can be two ways, leaving your faction and starting from scratch and trying to compete against your own team and make your creations, try to defeat him and thus not get bored against the other pantheons or become bad in and of yourself same. do all kinds of bad and fun things.