Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave
Shadow Slave
Guiltythree
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the comment about him having to "rush" before Nephis finishes the nightmare is odd. he should be outside of the timeline that his other companions are at. that's why he can see tons of broken ships... he even mentioned it himself about how time should not flow the same way where he is vs the rest of the great river.
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Guiltythree
It occurs to me that the first comments here have a lot of people with little patience . (This is unlikely to be the case for most readers , as these first comments obviously have paid more to be here sooner .) Thank you for the chapter. It seems you have taken Steven King’s advice “torture the darlings”?
I understand that G3 is on vacation, and I also understand that the only way for him to make money is to have a long story. That said, this is getting a bit out of hand. I feel that the last sixteen chapters could have occurred in three or four chapters if I'm being generous. I feel like I could take six months off, and when I came back, we'd just be finishing the third nightmare. I know that wouldn't be the case, or at least I really hope that isn't the case. It's probably just the vacation, and that's why these past several chapters have been elongated to such an extent. It doesn't change anything, I'm still going to keep buying chapters and coins, but I really hope we're getting to the end of this mini arc in the source....
