Guiltythree
I like the direction the story is taking, but there is one thing I'm not really enjoying. There is too little dialogue between the characters in the cohort and it often seems like it's just Sunny. I'd like to know more of the various characters' opinions and thoughts through dialogue, also to give them more depth. I know it's not easy to write a story consistently every day, but I think more depth to the characters would improve the work.
ya know... i just realized something... they guard a potential sleeper because if they die first nightmare then the creature could take their body... what if it was a person that killed them though? is it more that a random creature takes over or is it in that case the person basically changes souls? what if this is how the skinwalker started?