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Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave

Jubutia
JubutiaLv14Jubutia

Thanks for the chaps !šŸ˜šŸ¤˜

IceNSnow
IceNSnowLv15IceNSnow

Iā€™m gonna call it right now. The pyramid is a desert mirage (probably from Daemon magic) and it takes another method to travel to it rather than walking directly towards.

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Elas
ElasLv14Elas

I like the direction the story is taking, but there is one thing I'm not really enjoying. There is too little dialogue between the characters in the cohort and it often seems like it's just Sunny. I'd like to know more of the various characters' opinions and thoughts through dialogue, also to give them more depth. I know it's not easy to write a story consistently every day, but I think more depth to the characters would improve the work.

rebecca_loughlin
rebecca_loughlinLv14rebecca_loughlin

could sunny potentialy put on waevers mask and be able to see the way to the tomb through the strings of fate? seems like one of the only ways for them to find the way there.

DaoistOkIORt
DaoistOkIORtLv15DaoistOkIORt

why not ask cassie if its the tomb of ariel or just a mirage

Albirr_Chowdhury
Albirr_ChowdhuryLv14Albirr_Chowdhury

Tbh because of fated, think sunny will achieve both Mordys and Morganā€™s goals, heā€™ll do a nm at the pyramid

Zelos_draconis
Zelos_draconisLv15Zelos_draconis

So Iā€™m feeling a new nightmare arch and saint sunless, with sovereigns annoyed that our favorite corhort becoming saints without being under their command things are gonna be crazy

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MAN2O7F7G3O5D3
MAN2O7F7G3O5D3Lv15MAN2O7F7G3O5D3

šŸ˜šŸ‘

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Felcox
FelcoxLv15Felcox

Thanks for the chapter

Candlwax
CandlwaxLv14Candlwax

Join mirror man!

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Imprettystrange
ImprettystrangeLv15Imprettystrange

Thanks for the chapters!

Banaman
BanamanLv15Banaman

ya know... i just realized something... they guard a potential sleeper because if they die first nightmare then the creature could take their body... what if it was a person that killed them though? is it more that a random creature takes over or is it in that case the person basically changes souls? what if this is how the skinwalker started?

KRastaK
KRastaKLv13KRastaK

keep up the good work :]

skeleton_key
skeleton_keyLv15skeleton_key

Thank you for the chapter Guiltythree !

NobleQueenBee
NobleQueenBeeLv5NobleQueenBee

Morgan is determined. I will give her that.

The_fool
The_foolLv15The_fool

šŸ‘

abooj
aboojLv12abooj

with the emphasis on how tired they are, i wonder if they will snap before they try the third nightmare

MilkedUp
MilkedUpLv15MilkedUp

I'm still wondering how the smurf are they going to kill this monster pursuing them. And even if they avoid it by going into the nightmare they have to deal with it when they return

Asher_5717
Asher_5717Lv15Asher_5717

Weavers mask gonna make a reappearance soon?

Losh
LoshLv15Losh

Has he tried looking at the horizon in his shadow form? Maybe there is something visible only on that spectrum?