Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Slave
Shadow Slave
Guiltythree
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Recently i feel like the chapters are dull and empty. I don't even want to read anymore, i am the only one ? Takd the first paragraph of this chapter, all those words to say : the rain is heavy with a few strikes of lightning. I bet most people have forget it by mid chapter. There too many useless description like that recently, too many empty chapters where only a few information where usefull, so much that it kinda brake the rythme that shouldbbe the best part of this book.I use to love reading this book, to the point of not sleeping and now i don't really want to read anymore. I hope it will get better soon.
Burn out, probably. Descriptions are important in novels because a fight scene can feel disorganized and confusing. Choreography is hard to understand in a group battle without precise descriptions. G3 mostly avoids this by having characters 1v1 in the background and only giving minor updates as Sunny makes decisions under pressure.
