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well what you say is true and i think you misunderstand my point. What i meant is that recently i feel like the descriton are too lengthy for what they say. Why use 50 words when you can say the same thing with 20 ? It can be extended for the whole chatper too. Sometimes it is better to keep things simpler to be more impactfull.
Recently i feel like the chapters are dull and empty. I don't even want to read anymore, i am the only one ? Takd the first paragraph of this chapter, all those words to say : the rain is heavy with a few strikes of lightning. I bet most people have forget it by mid chapter. There too many useless description like that recently, too many empty chapters where only a few information where usefull, so much that it kinda brake the rythme that shouldbbe the best part of this book.I use to love reading this book, to the point of not sleeping and now i don't really want to read anymore. I hope it will get better soon.
beat way to get renvenge would be to steal the citadel from them. The terror of LO49 has great connection with the tomb of ariel might be a good starting point.by the way remember the river that flow back in time, strange how Sunny always find himself falling into the water when he enter a new location related to the spell or the dream realm.