Guiltythree
I kinda feel unsatisfied with past 73 chapters. A lot words were typed without saying much. The author does a great job of keeping the suspense and world building and immersion but at some points the suspense just become worthless words. I can sum up 73 chapters in 3-6 sentences and 4 points. 1) MC survive alone, got stonger and evolved an echo because he had a falling out with neph. 2) MC found a new friend, who is in the prophecy and meets neph when he goes back to the city to strengthen his echo. 3) He learns how Ganglung keeps his control over the castle, with his tyrent armor. 4) He had a falling out, once he finds out neph was planing to take over the castle and find a way to get to the gate, all because of his sense of ”justice” when he literally killed a dude in order keep his name a secret. This was the first book I ever spent money on this website, over the 2 years since I used this app, cause I really liked it. Also put all my votes and tickets on this novle that I saved up cause I had high hopes and enjoys it. But it doesn’ feel good to spend money and recive 50 chapters of just meaningless blabber. Also the charater development is kinda taking steps back, because the mc is being a hypocrite. Anyway I already typed too much, I hope this gets better we’ll see, if not then, welp.
That’s like saying one is a lesser evil, in the end evil is evil. And the mc has been manipulating people form the start of the book. Also I do like the suspense and world building and the vide but sometimes it’ too much. In cases like these.
Another_random_guy:Is the mc really an hypocrite ? I do not think so. It’s true that he killed someone, but it was a kill on the spur of the moment and because of a direct threat. Whereas Nephis is planning and orchestirig a big plan to escape that will kill a lot of people. The scope of the two is vastly different. Furthermore, killing an “innocent” really weighs on Sunny’s mind and made him think even more about Nephis’ plan. All in all, it’s not really being hypocritical, it’s more of an internal conlict. It’s true that the pace slowed down in volume 2, but I think it was needed. There were many exposition scenes, to put the setting of a whole new ecosystem : The castle and it’s surrounding. There also the need to introduce numerous charcters (Ganglung and it’s generals) , to create new relationships (caster and flying guy) and we even got murders (2 executions and a kill by mc). Sure it took some time and it may have been possible to make it shorter, but it would have been detrimental to what hooked me in : the atmosphere. I feel it didn’t was detrimental to characters development : we saw Sunny’s jealousy growing, we saw him having an internal conflict and then going mad from solitude. We saw Nephis turning more cunning, learned more about her. But I admit Cass lacked a bit of exposure. Well, maybe because you bought it you were expecting more, don’t know, but aniway hope you continue enjoy rea’ding (this book or another) Have a nice day