Guiltythree
Tbh, I'm not sure if I like the MC that much anymore. In the first few chapters he's very cold, mature and calculating. But he suddenly starts acting like a... well, shy and awkward goober child? Which, I guess...he is..? But my point is, that's not why I started reading. I liked the first few chapters a lot. It just feels like a big tone shift. And I think it started with his Flaw. It just strikes me as a little too... "LOL. I'm soOo RaNdOm!?! LoL" And that's kinda how he acts now too. If you catch my drift? I dunno. Just giving feedback. It's not unbearable.