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Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A New Life

TaleBeast
TaleBeastLv3TaleBeast

A Harry Potter fanfic with extreme au origins should at least have it mentioned somewhere in the synopsis or tags.

CodeSpectre
CodeSpectreLv4CodeSpectre

What is the point of Time Travel if he doesn't remember this life at all !!And I really hope this isn't a Harry/Hermione or Ginny fic since they are pairings that have gotten boring.A HarryxDaphne or HarryxFleur would be better.

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter

whitethief274
whitethief274Lv4whitethief274

reading this context I feel like I will just leave it halfway while a good idea it just feels too negative to read.

Tyller_Yang
Tyller_YangLv3Tyller_Yang

Harry x Katie Bell;

Draken_Phenix
Draken_PhenixLv14Draken_Phenix

moooooorrrrrreeee

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

not seeing this being an op mc. seems hes just going to repeat the same life this time but he will have a family

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

Osborn123
Osborn123Lv1Osborn123

So far this story doesn't really look good... It seems to be one of those that likes to focus on the dramas around the mc and turns him into a victim all the time...

DRACONIAN619
DRACONIAN619Lv13DRACONIAN619

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work

Akisu
AkisuLv13Akisu

Again the chapter itself is fine, but the capitalization errors are getting annoying, first it was just names then the entities embodying certain concepts, which made it annoying to keep track of when you are talking about the concepts and when you were talking about the entities embodying those concepts, then there are the missing capital letters after '?' or even sometimes after '.'. But I'll keep reading to see if those problems get fixed or if they keep repeating.